Editing the indie horror film "Almost Human" was no different, despite its brief running time of 70 minutes excluding credits. It's an alien abduction/slasher film. Many would expect it to be easier due to the genre and running time, however, this was not the case. Establishing the open scene initially took up a minute and 10 seconds. In this time-space, the main character, Seth, drives frantically to his friend Mark's house. Upon his arrival he's scared and babbles on about lights in the sky that had sucked his friend up. Mark obviously doesn't believe this and proceeds to question him. The lights in the house shut off and bright green/blue lights illuminate the exterior of the house. Mark investigates, something takes hold of him though. He begins to make his way to the front of the house, while an ear-piercing, high-pitched shriek almost paralyses Seth and Mark's girlfriend.
Mark walks outside and is beamed up into the sky. It then cuts to the film's main titles which then swiftly cuts to a montage of news reports of lights appearing in the sky and UFO reports. We then cut to Seth waking up from a nightmare with the title 2 years later. In order to cut this down to a more manageable time, all of the news reports included in the film and the first cut of the edit were removed. They were removed because they're basically just repeating what just happened to Mark. The audience would be able to know what's happening without needing the news reporters blatantly saying it to the screen. Quick jump cuts where used when Seth frantically races down to Mark's house. The driving scene was drastically chopped down. A line of dialogue was moved over to where Seth runs out of his car and into the house "Mark open the fucking door". This only accentuates the urgency of the situation and helps introduce the character of Mark.
What follow is a number of quick cuts of the events that occur. "He was sucked into the fucking sky", which then cuts to the lights cutting out, and the exterior of the house illuminating. This is followed by a crash-zoom on each character as the ear-piercing shriek happens. It then cuts to Mark being abducted which cuts to black with a fairly simple albertus-font titles. They're kept in a minimalist manner to reflect the film and the most of Carpenter's films of the 80s used that title, which obviously influenced this film heavily.
The second minute begins with Seth waking up. His alarm rings in the background. In order to cut out the fat in between Seth getting ready for work and the non-essential bits at work, a match cut was employed. When Seth hits the alarm off, it match cuts to him clocking in at work. This trims the fat of the first act. It then cuts to Seth talking to his co-worker, mid-sentence his nose starts to bleed again just like the waking up scene. We then cut to a panning shot in a wintery forest, with a voice-over of two hunters chatting. This then cuts to one of them pointing out a naked body in the snow. Next shot they approach him.
In the film, when they approach the naked Mark, he lets out a very alien shriek before proceeding to kill the two hunters and take their clothes. However, to save time, in the four minute edit, mark lets out the alien shriek and the two hunters fall to the ground and it fades out with a fade-out echo on the scream. It implies the ominous activities that mark's going to commit and links in the nosebleeds seth's been experiencing.
This then cuts to Seth speaking with Jen, Mark's ex-girlfriend in the diner. Here exposition occurs, as it's established that Seth thinks Mark's behind something that's happening right now. It's also establishes Jen's character. After this scene, Seth's back at work. His co-worker asks if he's heard about the killings. What proceeds is a number of intercutting shots. As the co-worker explains what happens, it cuts to shots of said kills. This helps cut down the running time and keep the story fluid. Seth then experiences a black-out.
After this, we cut to Jen in the diner just seeing the news on the tv. She decides to go home, only to discover Mark's there waiting for her. Here we find out Mark's alien plan. It then cuts to Seth waking up from his coach to a phonecall, its Jen trying to communicate with him. We intercut between Mark placing Jen in the basement and Seth arriving and finding the basement entrance.
In the actual film, Mark isn't down in the basement when Seth breaks in to rescue Jen. Instead in this edit he is, in order to save time. This is similar to the pod people that are in the film. The scene where one of the pod people attack Seth/Jen has bee removed in order to save time. Surprisingly, it doesn't affect the plot whatsoever. Instead what occurs is a fight between Mark and Seth. Mark knocks out Seth and Jen makes a break for it. What follows is a tightly cut down scene of Jen hiding in the house in a bedroom closet and Mark finds her and knocks down the closet door. A huge dialogue scene was taken out here as it wasn't necessary. Instead it cuts to Seth finding the gun and shooting Mark, as Mark tries to impregnate Jen with the alien tentacle.
Mark walks outside and is beamed up into the sky. It then cuts to the film's main titles which then swiftly cuts to a montage of news reports of lights appearing in the sky and UFO reports. We then cut to Seth waking up from a nightmare with the title 2 years later. In order to cut this down to a more manageable time, all of the news reports included in the film and the first cut of the edit were removed. They were removed because they're basically just repeating what just happened to Mark. The audience would be able to know what's happening without needing the news reporters blatantly saying it to the screen. Quick jump cuts where used when Seth frantically races down to Mark's house. The driving scene was drastically chopped down. A line of dialogue was moved over to where Seth runs out of his car and into the house "Mark open the fucking door". This only accentuates the urgency of the situation and helps introduce the character of Mark.
What follow is a number of quick cuts of the events that occur. "He was sucked into the fucking sky", which then cuts to the lights cutting out, and the exterior of the house illuminating. This is followed by a crash-zoom on each character as the ear-piercing shriek happens. It then cuts to Mark being abducted which cuts to black with a fairly simple albertus-font titles. They're kept in a minimalist manner to reflect the film and the most of Carpenter's films of the 80s used that title, which obviously influenced this film heavily.
The second minute begins with Seth waking up. His alarm rings in the background. In order to cut out the fat in between Seth getting ready for work and the non-essential bits at work, a match cut was employed. When Seth hits the alarm off, it match cuts to him clocking in at work. This trims the fat of the first act. It then cuts to Seth talking to his co-worker, mid-sentence his nose starts to bleed again just like the waking up scene. We then cut to a panning shot in a wintery forest, with a voice-over of two hunters chatting. This then cuts to one of them pointing out a naked body in the snow. Next shot they approach him.
In the film, when they approach the naked Mark, he lets out a very alien shriek before proceeding to kill the two hunters and take their clothes. However, to save time, in the four minute edit, mark lets out the alien shriek and the two hunters fall to the ground and it fades out with a fade-out echo on the scream. It implies the ominous activities that mark's going to commit and links in the nosebleeds seth's been experiencing.
This then cuts to Seth speaking with Jen, Mark's ex-girlfriend in the diner. Here exposition occurs, as it's established that Seth thinks Mark's behind something that's happening right now. It's also establishes Jen's character. After this scene, Seth's back at work. His co-worker asks if he's heard about the killings. What proceeds is a number of intercutting shots. As the co-worker explains what happens, it cuts to shots of said kills. This helps cut down the running time and keep the story fluid. Seth then experiences a black-out.
After this, we cut to Jen in the diner just seeing the news on the tv. She decides to go home, only to discover Mark's there waiting for her. Here we find out Mark's alien plan. It then cuts to Seth waking up from his coach to a phonecall, its Jen trying to communicate with him. We intercut between Mark placing Jen in the basement and Seth arriving and finding the basement entrance.
In the actual film, Mark isn't down in the basement when Seth breaks in to rescue Jen. Instead in this edit he is, in order to save time. This is similar to the pod people that are in the film. The scene where one of the pod people attack Seth/Jen has bee removed in order to save time. Surprisingly, it doesn't affect the plot whatsoever. Instead what occurs is a fight between Mark and Seth. Mark knocks out Seth and Jen makes a break for it. What follows is a tightly cut down scene of Jen hiding in the house in a bedroom closet and Mark finds her and knocks down the closet door. A huge dialogue scene was taken out here as it wasn't necessary. Instead it cuts to Seth finding the gun and shooting Mark, as Mark tries to impregnate Jen with the alien tentacle.